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Anonymous
1/2/17, 5:48 PM
Love love love your work. Just wondering if maybe Mr hersts cooking (concoctions) are what made Nico the way he is, and could the latest gravy maybe change the twins.
1/2/17, 4:45 PM
For nycboot - Thanks again for the generous comment. Even me, the author, will go back and reread some of my stories. After all, they are my fantasies. But Brain Feed is one that I find myself reading over and over. I think I understand your desire for David to have a more gradual transformation. If I remember, I decided to go for the "rush" transformation because the story isn't broken up into chapters. It was just going to be one story, and it was going to go out with a bang. For tomozco - Thanks for the comments. I appreciate that. I wouldn't worry about your storytelling. Us, authors, have to work on our skills. Every story we write is a way for us to improve our storytelling abilities. Not only do we have to come up with a new idea, a new plot, but we also have to think of a new way to narrate or tell the story. This means doing first person, third person, linear, non-linear and all different way of storytelling. I, personally, enjoyed your MCP series. I enjoyed the overall concept and imagery. It's very much in line with what my interests are, and what gets me off. But I will also tell you: that as you continue to write and stretch yourself, your writing will improve. And you will write other stories that will blow the socks off The MCP.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 4:40 PM
Where is the next chapter. Cant wait for it.
1/2/17, 3:41 PM
Okay. I know I said I would tease out my readership, but I felt I had to throw in two chapters in one day. The reason is that I feel the beginning of Infiltration is more about set-up. And as a result, this story has a slow beginning. Bear with me, guys. I really do think you're going to enjoy this one. We just have to slog through Deck's orientation before the story really kicks off.
William Monroe
1/2/17, 3:00 PM
Excellent writing . . . thank you! This is a refreshing change from some of the recent material here.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 11:25 AM
HI this is an amazing story - when can we have part s 2, 3, 4...
Anonymous
1/2/17, 10:48 AM
Nice! Nice! Nice! This is the best chapter that you have ever written! So hot! So many hunky men to play with! Really a masterpiece! You did a great job! You have to keep going! Let us see the next chapter please! So marvelous!
Muscleboi
1/2/17, 10:19 AM
Please write another chapter would love to know what happens next
Anonymous
1/2/17, 8:30 AM
But then what happens next?
Anonymous
1/2/17, 7:20 AM
Happy New Year, Edlam! I send you my best wishes in this new 2017!