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Muscleboi
1/2/17, 10:19 AM
Please write another chapter would love to know what happens next
Anonymous
1/2/17, 8:30 AM
But then what happens next?
Anonymous
1/2/17, 7:20 AM
Happy New Year, Edlam! I send you my best wishes in this new 2017!
tomozco
1/2/17, 6:59 AM
Another great storyline from rubbrsome! I think you're an inspiration for many of us on here...myself being one of them. I only wish my storytelling skills is as good as yours. Thanks for another awesome start, I'll look forward to the rest of your series.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 6:17 AM
I know you wrote this a while back... PLEASE consider writing another chapter! please!
Anonymous
1/2/17, 6:14 AM
Kinda surprised by how much I enjoyed this. A lot of stories would have focused more on the sex that would have resulted from this transformation rather than the transformation itself, but I think that this works very well as a standalone story, though that's not to say that I wouldn't want to see more of the 'good fortune' Sir Charles Magnus-Drake brings to people. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
1/2/17, 5:40 AM
Really enjoyed it. I found it hard to mentally keep track of who got which changes, and Kyle's name randomly changed to Kevin about halfway through. Overall though, solid writing with only a handful of errors. Nice.
bqueman4@gmail.com
1/2/17, 3:58 AM
So hot, major turn on. This story needs a part two.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 3:41 AM
Awesome beginning. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
1/2/17, 3:19 AM
What a treat to have another rubbrsome story! You're off to a great start - wonderful pacing in this story - I just can't wait to read the rest of it. And thank you so much for considering to revisit Brain Feed, one of my favorite stories on this site (I always wanted a more gradual transition for Dave). Looking forward to however you choose to release it.