Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/31/16, 4:45 AM
Nice story, hope there is more to come. Cant wait till we get more to the story ^_^
Anonymous
12/31/16, 4:26 AM
I'd imagine a new gentleman would also need a butler...
12/31/16, 1:00 AM
Awesome! Really excited for more!!!
Anonymous
12/31/16, 12:21 AM
Cool! Cant wait for the whole series! Thanks alot for your hard work...
Anonymous
12/30/16, 11:37 PM
Well that was awesome :D can't wait for the other instalments Thanks !
Anonymous
12/30/16, 11:28 PM
Always a hot and cool story!! Love ya!!
tomozco
12/30/16, 10:47 PM
Wow, didn't expect that many feedback! Thanks so much again everyone! Thanks also for the person that pointed out my silly math skills...rational thinking is not always at 100% when you're immersed in your fantasy I guess...lol ;p I'm happy that this series has been enjoyed by so many of you, even though it's not totally on the MC theme. Moving on I'll slowly get back to the Family Matters series and hoping to wrap that up in a few more chapters as well, just to close off some ideas I had started previously. Other than that, it'll be whatever pops into my mind and I get motivated enough to put it down to words. So thanks again and stay tuned! ;)
UchihaDEMS
12/30/16, 9:59 PM
They will find out when they add new orders once he comes back to the military. Hot tho.
Anonymous
12/30/16, 8:54 PM
Please write more it was so good :D
Anonymous
12/30/16, 8:53 PM
So glad that none of them got rescued. I also liked that derek was just placed in the VR reality without any"preparations" and just have his brain naturally snap. It feels right somehow