Recent Comments

1/1/17, 3:52 PM
You could borrow the stratagem of the mysterious aliens who run the conversion factories in your stories--entice us unsuspecting victims (i.e., the readers) to take the first, seemingly innocuous step (read Chap 1) and then another (Chap 2) and then another (Chap 3). Before long we will be hooked, as word by word you take over our imaginations, not to mention anatomical parts. As thoughts of black rubber pervade our minds and stiffen our cocks, you can do what you like, even make us beg for more or produce enough cum to satisfy those insatiable aliens. Just keep the chapters coming!
1/1/17, 2:48 PM
For z119z - Thanks. You make me blush a little. Sometimes I don't expect people to react so favorably to my stories. And I just posted it. So to get an immediate response is very encouraging. So, I want you to know that this story will have eleven chapters. All of which are fully written and will be posted (hmmm) maybe every other day or so. Perhaps I should tease the readers out. What do you think? Should I post every other day? Or make you guys beg for it? Just so you all know, this story will start slow. But hopefully by the end, I have some of you guys cumming.
Sparky
1/1/17, 2:14 PM
Great start. Can't wait for more.
1/1/17, 1:52 PM
What a great way to start the new year--a new rubbrsome story and it's only the first chapter (of many I hope)! Looking forward to the next chapters.
Dec 27, 2016
Anonymous
1/1/17, 10:25 AM
Such a hot story, very nice work!
1/1/17, 7:47 AM
Wonderfully twisted story. Really engrossing narrative - bravo!
Spudforth
1/1/17, 4:53 AM
YES! I love this story!
Anonymous
1/1/17, 4:29 AM
Have him bring home some of the other cyborgs on leave
Anonymous
12/31/16, 7:21 PM
I love this. I would love to see some pup or abdl scenes for the next or later chapter.
rofous
12/31/16, 12:49 PM
more of this. what about a massage theme for next chapter . hypnotist with terrifying massage skill