Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/30/16, 11:28 PM
Always a hot and cool story!! Love ya!!
tomozco
12/30/16, 10:47 PM
Wow, didn't expect that many feedback! Thanks so much again everyone! Thanks also for the person that pointed out my silly math skills...rational thinking is not always at 100% when you're immersed in your fantasy I guess...lol ;p I'm happy that this series has been enjoyed by so many of you, even though it's not totally on the MC theme. Moving on I'll slowly get back to the Family Matters series and hoping to wrap that up in a few more chapters as well, just to close off some ideas I had started previously. Other than that, it'll be whatever pops into my mind and I get motivated enough to put it down to words. So thanks again and stay tuned! ;)
UchihaDEMS
12/30/16, 9:59 PM
They will find out when they add new orders once he comes back to the military. Hot tho.
Anonymous
12/30/16, 8:54 PM
Please write more it was so good :D
Anonymous
12/30/16, 8:53 PM
So glad that none of them got rescued. I also liked that derek was just placed in the VR reality without any"preparations" and just have his brain naturally snap. It feels right somehow
Anonymous
12/30/16, 7:24 PM
I love it! I'm ready for those other 5 parts now ;)
biguynj
12/30/16, 6:45 PM
Thanks for a great series Tomozco. It's good to see a writer see his project all the way thru. Liked how all have a happy ending so to speak . Hope to see more from you
Anonymous
12/30/16, 6:27 PM
I couldnt have thought of a lovely ending. Finally, a series thats not left unfinished
Anonymous
12/30/16, 5:27 PM
Hot, sexy, incredible. I'm still hard.
Anonymous
12/30/16, 5:15 PM
:D