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Anonymous
12/27/16, 8:50 AM
Thanks for the author note! Looking forward to more :)
Dec 25, 2016
12/27/16, 4:20 AM
Hot story! Wish it was longer. (I would also consider the Zynz to be a form of a satyr - how about "alien satyr"?)
12/27/16, 1:09 AM
Thanks to everyone for commenting. This series, heavens support me in writing it all, has been outlined from beginning to end. There's a reason why Greg, Nico's father, is terrible to his son, there's an origin to how Nico got the way he is now, for now we're just getting a look at his daily life. The story is like an inversion of the "Boy Next Door" idea. Nico is the average american boy next door - that everyone has forgotten about. There won't be a Beaver to his Wally. No Betty/Veronica to his Archie. And no protective Winifried to Nico's Dobie Gillis (Dobie's Mother often kept Dobie from the worst of his father's demands). If you can, pay close attention to what H.R. says about Meadowdaleville, For now, just suspend your disbelief and ride along, it should all come together. Again, thanks to everyone for commenting!
12/27/16, 12:11 AM
I can't get this story out of my mind. It's really lovely! Thank you for sharing it!
Dec 25, 2016
Anonymous
12/27/16, 12:06 AM
This was good---quite good.
Dec 25, 2016
Anonymous
12/26/16, 11:27 PM
Hot as fuck like all your stories!!! Love your work
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
12/26/16, 5:03 PM
Please.......keep on writing
Anonymous
12/26/16, 10:53 AM
Great! I love you! Edlam!
Dec 25, 2016
Cliff
12/26/16, 9:15 AM
Maybe just because Zynz is an alien, not satyr :-) Anyway, I thought the doctor's perspective was alright, the typical mc/oblivious scheme, but the Zynz's perspective may have some room for improvement, about the "Game/Player" plot. A little more revelation here or there, or in the sequel, would be great!
CuBoi
12/26/16, 8:09 AM
Whoa, maybe one of the best faggification stories on here that I only just stumbled into!