Oh yikes....Collin really screwed things up here! As much as his kindness is a strength, what he did to eleven just tipped things in the favor of the demons. At least he's realized his mistake, but it's much too late to undo that. Also seeing what he's capable of is scary- I only hope he isn't demonized. Meanwhile, the grandmasters continues to showcase some of the horrifying things he went through. That gil literally watched as he was butchered to death is horrifying. No wonder he doesn't trust emotional ties. It didn't save him now did it? Does gil even know about that, or does he just not care, or viewed it as a necessary sacrifice? Eleven is fascinating in how despite being a beastfolk she shows the northern temperance that's kept them away from excess. I only hope that she gets away since she's catatonic right now. The necromancer is starting to become more freaky because if what Leon said is true he literally shouldn't even be capable of being spoken to right now. And then there's that screaming mystery prisoner from a few chapters back.... If the demon who converted gregory is coming, things are about to get so much worse. The ridiculous part about this is how the grandmasters and the demons are not right in their actions, but somehow have mutually deluded themselves in thinking everything they did and have done is right. The grandmaster is right though that the demons are really just slaves to pleasure and are essentially dealing in conquest though. But the demons are right that eastern culture has its issues, and Collin was dealt major labor violations. Collin using pain to ground himself makes so much sense, and I honestly suspected he'd use that to keep himself stable. I am so worried for Eddie now. Him and Jason are I fear, about to have the fright of a lifetime...if they even wind up staying as themselves and alive. I only hope Collin and Eddie can, and Jason too. Honestly, I just hope the beastfolk face some consequences for this. If it wasn't for them putting a hit on Collin and being unhinged, literally none of this would have happened. Or if it did, to a far less degree. The primal beast has probably already put two and two together and is probably not prepared at all. Thanks to their nonsense, it's likely the east and west are about to face the threat of demonic hordes. And the folk in wolfheim based on last chapter seem none the wide. That's going to probably come back to bite them. If the north shares a border with the east (though it seems it only shares a border with the western regions), this is going to spiral into a multi region conflict/catastrophe

Mindwipe/corruption/betrayal stories are my favorites. I look forward to the next installment.

This was great.

A good story with an open ending. I like that everything happens gradually and I also liked the moment with Cassie at the end and the police, which gives hope that the Police realized that something is wrong with him and they will take up this case in the future and possibly return him to his previous state (although he is unlikely to be able to live like before after everything that happened to him).

Intriguing start! And I am _always_ happy to be able to read more of the excellent stories coming from your mind, so thank you for sharing it!!

Hell yeah dude, love it when stories lean into fatherhood (expecting soon myself) without losing the beauty of appreciating your fellow man. Can only imagine the moms “helped” Carrie out too, but I’m certainly partial to sticking with the neighborhood _Daddies_. Great work.

omfg. thats scary and sexy at the same time. the idea to have my dick shrunken against my will. the story could have been longer though

Excellent as always. Can’t wait to see where it goes.

I hope the continuation won't take long to come) It will be interesting to see the confrontation between these characters. I also hope that if the story continues, it will end with a cliffhanger and the ending will be unexpected) and not where the Hero or the Villain wins).

Please, write another part