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Aug 29, 2024
8/29/24, 2:05 PM
Hell yeah dude, love it when stories lean into fatherhood (expecting soon myself) without losing the beauty of appreciating your fellow man. Can only imagine the moms “helped” Carrie out too, but I’m certainly partial to sticking with the neighborhood _Daddies_. Great work.
asdf
8/29/24, 2:00 PM
omfg. thats scary and sexy at the same time. the idea to have my dick shrunken against my will. the story could have been longer though
8/29/24, 1:58 PM
Excellent as always. Can’t wait to see where it goes.
Zander
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
I hope the continuation won't take long to come) It will be interesting to see the confrontation between these characters. I also hope that if the story continues, it will end with a cliffhanger and the ending will be unexpected) and not where the Hero or the Villain wins).
Anonymous
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
Please, write another part
8/29/24, 11:13 AM
Great story. Would have loved to see a slow burn realisation of their lives changing post surgery that ultimately leads them towards each other in a power exchange.. hot. Keep writing :)
8/29/24, 11:06 AM
Amazing can’t wait for it to continue! Insanely hot!
8/29/24, 10:26 AM
Very promising premise, would have been fun to see more of it, but with slightly longer chapters, this felt a little rushed.
8/29/24, 9:44 AM
Really cool!
8/29/24, 8:47 AM
I am sorry, but I couldn't enjoy this chapter, the emotions were good and the fight scenes too, but it got to dark for me and Eleven's death soured me a lot, I felt like overkill

Pcm
8/29/24, 8:53 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) That's understandable, I know that this is likely not for anyone. Still hope that you will stick around to the end, and your input is always appreciated. Also, not sure if this helps things, but Eleven is not dead, just catatonic.

8/29/24, 8:57 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I see, I will stick to the end, as I will do my two stories and the what if, also, I hope that means she could recover eventually

Pcm
8/29/24, 9:33 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I know that I'm kinda fridging her (especially to drive the story of male characters), and that is kinda cruel. That would not preclude her from being included in other storylines, whether a prequel or sequel for this.

8/29/24, 9:39 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Okay