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timsuks
12/15/16, 9:28 PM
nice story, continue
CockfagAshton
12/15/16, 8:03 PM
More Hiryumingo. It is a wonderful series. I love jerking off too. This latest game was a lot of fun.
Guyinyourhead
12/15/16, 6:52 PM
And now a word from a published author. Loki, considering some of the efforts that have found their way to publication on this site, yours does not deserve the bitchy response it has received from some here. I do agree that your story would have benefited from a bit more effort having been devoted to plot development. Of most concern is the need for you to in some way explain how it was--through what power or device--the gay neighbor was able to influence and transform the unruly jock. Otherwise, I enjoyed your effort. Don't give up.
alx62
12/15/16, 5:25 PM
so hot horny as hell thinking of it being me what next ?
Anonymous
12/15/16, 4:02 PM
i like it . I m just not into the body type you selected. Hope we get an other one.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 3:36 PM
So hot, so sexy. Plus the element of control -- I'm still hard.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 3:29 PM
Another example of an someone who has an idea and puts a couple of words together thinks he's an author. Sparky -- take the story down, spend a couple of days editing, have a friend read it and then repost it. Maybe you'll get it right the second time. This version is unreadable.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 3:03 PM
Hot!! I'm still hard.
Spandexlad
12/15/16, 1:08 PM
I think you might need to add some sort of header to let us know who is talking or rewrite this in 3rd person. I honestly don't know who is saying the last paragraph. The Jock's language through out makes it seem like he thinks he's in control and since we don't know that the gay guy did to him we don't know if the gay guy's fetish is to be dominated by the Jock (he did allow the jock to force him in his house) so it could be the gay guy or maybe the jock is submitting. I would also like to see more of a change happen in the beginning.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 11:33 AM
Best story. Is AgainstMyWill still around?