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Spandexlad
12/15/16, 1:08 PM
I think you might need to add some sort of header to let us know who is talking or rewrite this in 3rd person. I honestly don't know who is saying the last paragraph. The Jock's language through out makes it seem like he thinks he's in control and since we don't know that the gay guy did to him we don't know if the gay guy's fetish is to be dominated by the Jock (he did allow the jock to force him in his house) so it could be the gay guy or maybe the jock is submitting. I would also like to see more of a change happen in the beginning.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 11:33 AM
Best story. Is AgainstMyWill still around?
Anonymous
12/15/16, 11:31 AM
The hottest. I need more AgainstMyWill in my life.
Anonymous
12/15/16, 10:34 AM
I agree with everyone one else. A portion of the story seems missing it went from the perspective of the main character to the football player with no explanation.
gymini29
12/15/16, 10:05 AM
very good! but there is no description of the "how" or "why" the change happened. He's a homophobe and he just began to transform from straight to gay?
Anonymous
12/15/16, 7:20 AM
Look forward to next chapter. ... very good. Thanks for sharing
Anonymous
12/15/16, 6:10 AM
Great, but I feel you left it ... half way? :-/ It was building up well
Willie Cici
12/15/16, 5:36 AM
It is with a heavy heart that I've decided to KEEP ON WRITING AND POSTING MY STORIES. I love the creative process and I enjoy reading the comments. As I have said, it takes a lot to offend me. It will take much more than some punk ass comment to stop me from posting my stories, Thanks to my supporters, named and anonymous. I'll try to keep you entertained. Semper Scribere!! - WC
12/15/16, 4:09 AM
@Cliff: Thanks, I really do appreciate your comments, this is what keeps my writing fluids flowing :) @biguyni: Thanks to you, too. I've got plans for Kell (and for Jost, as well), so as long as I can get my motivation up and can find the time, this will certainly not be the last time you hear about them and there will be new transformations as well, of course... :)
biguynj
12/15/16, 3:07 AM
I find this series very interesting. The points of view are definitely good was hoping that Corin would have been ordered to push Kell into the white upright bench so he could be the Professors next victim