Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/15/16, 7:20 AM
Look forward to next chapter. ... very good. Thanks for sharing
Anonymous
12/15/16, 6:10 AM
Great, but I feel you left it ... half way? :-/ It was building up well
Willie Cici
12/15/16, 5:36 AM
It is with a heavy heart that I've decided to KEEP ON WRITING AND POSTING MY STORIES. I love the creative process and I enjoy reading the comments. As I have said, it takes a lot to offend me. It will take much more than some punk ass comment to stop me from posting my stories, Thanks to my supporters, named and anonymous. I'll try to keep you entertained. Semper Scribere!! - WC
12/15/16, 4:09 AM
@Cliff: Thanks, I really do appreciate your comments, this is what keeps my writing fluids flowing :) @biguyni: Thanks to you, too. I've got plans for Kell (and for Jost, as well), so as long as I can get my motivation up and can find the time, this will certainly not be the last time you hear about them and there will be new transformations as well, of course... :)
biguynj
12/15/16, 3:07 AM
I find this series very interesting. The points of view are definitely good was hoping that Corin would have been ordered to push Kell into the white upright bench so he could be the Professors next victim
timsuks
12/15/16, 1:30 AM
a different look at mind control. nice touch
dickshit
12/14/16, 9:42 PM
if only it was so easy too become such a mindless fuckpig!!!! rkglum@gmail.com
12/14/16, 7:48 PM
Interesting. I'm neither into fat men nor animal transformations, but I still had a very nice wank reading your story. Very well done! Congrats!
Anonymous
12/14/16, 7:39 PM
I agree with what both Hypnothrill and Cliff both said. But also, I worry that the most recent slam against Willi Cici could be a start of a dangerous precedent. If writers begin to fear being trolled and heavily criticized for their writing, then they will simply cease to post their stories. If that happens, then we will see the story posted on this site to dry up. For me, I enjoy this site too much and would hate to see that happen. As Hypnothrill said, not all stories are to my taste. I can usually tell within reading the first few paragraphs. And most often, I can usually tell that I enjoy specific authors above others. And also, the tags assigned to the stories certainly help. So perhaps readers can choose whether to pursue reading stories by following certain authors, getting a feeling within the first few paragraphs or by the tags.
TheWanderer
12/14/16, 6:02 PM
Keep it up. If you want to know what flaws you have: I feel like the story flow is not smooth enough? Like it's jagged? >.< If you want to improve it, try describing more of what's happening?