Recent Comments

timsuks
12/15/16, 1:30 AM
a different look at mind control. nice touch
dickshit
12/14/16, 9:42 PM
if only it was so easy too become such a mindless fuckpig!!!! rkglum@gmail.com
12/14/16, 7:48 PM
Interesting. I'm neither into fat men nor animal transformations, but I still had a very nice wank reading your story. Very well done! Congrats!
Anonymous
12/14/16, 7:39 PM
I agree with what both Hypnothrill and Cliff both said. But also, I worry that the most recent slam against Willi Cici could be a start of a dangerous precedent. If writers begin to fear being trolled and heavily criticized for their writing, then they will simply cease to post their stories. If that happens, then we will see the story posted on this site to dry up. For me, I enjoy this site too much and would hate to see that happen. As Hypnothrill said, not all stories are to my taste. I can usually tell within reading the first few paragraphs. And most often, I can usually tell that I enjoy specific authors above others. And also, the tags assigned to the stories certainly help. So perhaps readers can choose whether to pursue reading stories by following certain authors, getting a feeling within the first few paragraphs or by the tags.
TheWanderer
12/14/16, 6:02 PM
Keep it up. If you want to know what flaws you have: I feel like the story flow is not smooth enough? Like it's jagged? >.< If you want to improve it, try describing more of what's happening?
12/14/16, 4:02 PM
Wow, just WOW! From previous chapters, I knew you have a talent for writing, but this chapter exceeded my expectation. Great Job!
12/14/16, 3:41 PM
Please stop being an ass. Any author who'd like to contribute in the forum is a treasure. If you don't like it, just go away, or try to give some constructive suggestion. Trolling someone ,especially to Willie Cici, a long time content provider, is bad for GSMCSC.
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
12/14/16, 3:40 PM
I think the comment right above me ("your stories still suck") was uncalled for. Willie Cici's stories aren't always to my taste, but they're clearly well-crafted works of fiction. There are many authors on here who are much less skilled and talented, and even those authors deserve encouragement. After all, they're generously contributing their work for free, and they're brave enough to post in a forum where they might be criticized.
Luke
12/14/16, 3:31 PM
Great to see Brian's back,lol.lots of authors create too many characters so the story sounds boring and lame.I think your idea was great,That some main characters in former chapters appears again make the narratives of the story much more fascinating. My first language is not English, but I still feels the story you wrote is hot,keep going.
Anonymous
12/14/16, 6:12 AM
You spend all that time writing and editing -- and your stories still suck!!