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Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/14/16, 5:34 AM
Total and complete domination! Hot!
Anonymous
12/14/16, 4:02 AM
nice beginning...interested to see where u go with it
Supersaiyan1987
12/13/16, 9:46 PM
I'm finally thinking about moving forward with this story. Got any ideas/leads which you might find interesting?
Anonymous
12/13/16, 7:26 PM
Or maybe Dad gets "Teddified" just like his son. That would be interesting.
Willie Cici
12/13/16, 4:36 PM
Thank you for the comments. I am always amazed at the emotion generated by the stories posted on this site and the response that comes forth from that emotion. I do not offend easily. In terms of this website, I take the comments seriously. I use them to keep me grounded and to correct defects in my writing and thinking. However, let me respond to this comment: . . . it's like you're not every trying to write well but simply spitting them out as fast as you can without any care about the effect they have . . . From genesis to posting, I take anywhere from 7 to 30 days to write a 4 to 6 MSWord page story. It starts with the idea, takes off in stream writing, and then marinates in editing. I work on about five to eight stories at a time. Every day, I re-read a story, tweak a little here, edit a little there. Indicting my posting a new story every three to four days is an insult to my work ethic. I don't post anything that I have not completed and feel satisfied. You may not like the product, but the process is intense and should be respected. The good authors on this website know what it means to write, edit, re-write, further edit and then post a creative piece of writing. For those who think this creative process is simple: TRY IT. How many new writers post their first story, so proud and the "authors" don't edit, don't read their finish product, don't even run spell check? Where's the quality there? Or take a story that goes on for page after page after page? As long as I enjoy writing and posting stories, I will. If you see my name and enjoy my stories, read on. If you see my name and are compelled to skip the story, go ahead. Like I said, i write for MY PLEASURE. Keep the comments coming -- WC.
Anonymous
12/13/16, 4:07 PM
If someone leaves a comment that is as long as the story, then the author has done his job. In fact, I would argue he did his job well. He hit a nerve and got a reaction. That's good creative writing. These stories are not pulitzers. They are fantasy. They do not require extensive back history. Use your imagination. Candy says she'll have sex with anyone she encounters. You've met people like that. Jerry couldn't wait to have his picture taken. You've met people like that. Use your imagination. If imagination eludes you, then here's your backstory. The antagonists are massive assholes. Everyone that comes in contact with them is fodder for their unchecked greed. Jerry, Luca, and Candy did nothing to deserve their fate. That's it.
12/13/16, 2:08 PM
The series just like many hot sale " first novel " by new authors, you know there are some flaw, but you can feel the sincerity of telling a great story, and that matter most. Thanks for your contribution. I like the world settings, and the protagonist who is cocky, a little selfish but have a good heart after all. Take your time, hope there will be more chapters!
Anonymous
12/13/16, 5:43 AM
These people complaining about spelling and grammar when they can't even spell check their own comment.
Anonymous
12/13/16, 4:01 AM
After reading and being disappointed by a few, I confess I never read Cici's stories. For me, "quality over quantity" leads to a more meaningful experience. Will, it's like you're not every trying to write well but simply spitting them out as fast as you can without any care about the effect they have.
EdIam
12/13/16, 3:20 AM
Far too kind! Thank you! Still trying to find time to buckle down and work on Chapter 10!