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mindfuck
12/12/16, 10:42 PM
This series is phenomenal, so goddamn hot and well written. Keep doing what you're doing!
Anonymous
12/12/16, 9:31 PM
It's not about being PC. It's about good story-telling. And this story isn't good. Take for instance, in previous Willi Cici stories, he'll often have a homophobic character that will usual berate or physically attack the protagonist. So when this character receives his comeuppance, later in the story, that is what is called: just desserts, poetic justice, or he had it coming to him. And the reader can usually feel satisfied with this outcome. However, in this story, virtually no backstory has been given to the receptionist. All the reader is to know is that she is being brainwashed, pimped out, and later ridiculed for her behavior (which she isn't in control of). Because no backstory is given, she is therefore an innocent victim. And as a previous person commented, we are left with two "assholes" who get away with their scam. If anything, the two assholes are the antagonists and it's them that should be punished. This is why this story fails. Again, not about political correctness; it's about good story telling. And Willi Cici certainly knows how to tell a good story because he's used this method previously. Perhaps if he should flesh out a backstory and develop the characters better.
M
12/12/16, 9:08 PM
Very nice start! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Anonymous
12/12/16, 8:51 PM
Good start!! Loved it!
Anonymous
12/12/16, 8:45 PM
Last comment -- you are so dead on the money.
Youngkinkster
12/12/16, 8:14 PM
The best one yet, I hope its not the last!
Anonymous
12/12/16, 7:18 PM
Might have to buy this! Bought an earlier story from this author before. As for the Kindle, you can read Kindle stories without a Kindle by using a free Kindle app for both iPhone & iPad.
Anonymous
12/12/16, 7:15 PM
Great story! Would love to see this continued.
Leonard
12/12/16, 6:17 PM
Awesome story! Love chastity stories. Really hot