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Oct 19, 2016
Anonymous
12/11/16, 10:42 PM
Would really love to see this story continued!
Anonymous
12/11/16, 9:47 PM
I'm not sure if I have a problem with the brief inclusion of a woman in the story. But it's the fact that they call her a "whore". First of all, the two people are the ones pimping her out, and making her into the whore. And then they have the gall to degrade her with the word "whore". Then laughing, fist-pumping and proud .... this story ended on a real downer.
Anonymous
12/11/16, 7:19 PM
Love these. Maybe for the next one you can make the game itself more of a character. In this one it seems to have a mind of its own but I'm sure you can take it further to change up the format.
Anonymous
12/11/16, 7:07 PM
Why do you include women? This is a gay story site.
Anonymous
12/11/16, 6:15 PM
Please make more. i must obey Master!
12/11/16, 5:38 PM
Thanks for the comments. They're always appreciated. More of Jack and Cal's story is forthcoming. An eagled-eyed reader noticed a typo--somewhere above a cock surges slowly "in an out" of the Bear's ass. Chalk the missing "d" up to a momentary lapse in attention as the author indulged in pleasant memories.
Anonymous
12/11/16, 4:26 PM
Loved it!
Jamieti684
12/11/16, 4:22 PM
Amazing story! You are supremely talented. Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
12/11/16, 8:53 AM
Great story... is there a part 2?!?
TimNJ
12/11/16, 6:21 AM
It, uh, worked for me!