Recent Comments

8/29/24, 1:58 PM
Excellent as always. Can’t wait to see where it goes.
Zander
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
I hope the continuation won't take long to come) It will be interesting to see the confrontation between these characters. I also hope that if the story continues, it will end with a cliffhanger and the ending will be unexpected) and not where the Hero or the Villain wins).
Anonymous
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
Please, write another part
8/29/24, 11:13 AM
Great story. Would have loved to see a slow burn realisation of their lives changing post surgery that ultimately leads them towards each other in a power exchange.. hot. Keep writing :)
8/29/24, 11:06 AM
Amazing can’t wait for it to continue! Insanely hot!
8/29/24, 10:26 AM
Very promising premise, would have been fun to see more of it, but with slightly longer chapters, this felt a little rushed.
8/29/24, 9:44 AM
Really cool!
8/29/24, 8:47 AM
I am sorry, but I couldn't enjoy this chapter, the emotions were good and the fight scenes too, but it got to dark for me and Eleven's death soured me a lot, I felt like overkill

Pcm
8/29/24, 8:53 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) That's understandable, I know that this is likely not for anyone. Still hope that you will stick around to the end, and your input is always appreciated. Also, not sure if this helps things, but Eleven is not dead, just catatonic.

8/29/24, 8:57 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I see, I will stick to the end, as I will do my two stories and the what if, also, I hope that means she could recover eventually

Pcm
8/29/24, 9:33 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I know that I'm kinda fridging her (especially to drive the story of male characters), and that is kinda cruel. That would not preclude her from being included in other storylines, whether a prequel or sequel for this.

8/29/24, 9:39 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Okay
Anonymous
8/29/24, 8:31 AM
Although the violence in this chapter is much more apparent, the emotions are even more , with the highlight being col rescuing his brother and father

Pcm
8/29/24, 8:57 AM
@Anonymous It certainly is a dilemma for him.

Anonymous
8/29/24, 9:11 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I just love this series not just for erotic sex ( that also good) but also for the emotions and heart of the characters

Pcm
8/29/24, 9:30 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! I tried to keep make them lovable in some ways, corrupted or uncorrupted.
Anonymous
8/29/24, 8:47 AM
Sorry, I couldn’t read this to the end, not for me:(