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Anonymous
12/5/16, 7:03 AM
Balarai
Anonymous
12/5/16, 7:02 AM
It takes guts to share your story on here. I tried and gave up, I wasn't very good. Your story was very good, Bala rain is one of my favorites too
12/5/16, 1:05 AM
this is hot. is there a follow up where the client and isaac shows the video in a small court? enslaving and triggering even the bailiff and the plaintiff? just a thought...
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12/5/16, 12:39 AM
This is an very original story idea! I was even aroused when reading it ! I hope at some time you have the chance to get back to it and continue !
12/4/16, 10:56 PM
Great story :)
Anonymous
12/4/16, 9:26 PM
Great story! Loved it! Keep writing.
Anonymous
12/4/16, 9:08 PM
Awesome story. Definitely worth a second chapter.
TheWanderer
12/4/16, 4:59 PM
Not sure if this was intentional but you kinda forgot to tell the cop to turn gay(?), just a plot hole. Otherwise it's pretty good
Anonymous
12/4/16, 4:15 PM
:D please keep writing!
12/4/16, 1:53 PM
thanks for all the comments, I write spontaneously so even I don't really plan what happens ! I'm writing a third and final part to this story, if you have any requests write to me at my email at the top =D