Recent Comments

hypnosiscmh@gmail.com
12/5/16, 12:39 AM
This is an very original story idea! I was even aroused when reading it ! I hope at some time you have the chance to get back to it and continue !
12/4/16, 10:56 PM
Great story :)
Anonymous
12/4/16, 9:26 PM
Great story! Loved it! Keep writing.
Anonymous
12/4/16, 9:08 PM
Awesome story. Definitely worth a second chapter.
TheWanderer
12/4/16, 4:59 PM
Not sure if this was intentional but you kinda forgot to tell the cop to turn gay(?), just a plot hole. Otherwise it's pretty good
Anonymous
12/4/16, 4:15 PM
:D please keep writing!
12/4/16, 1:53 PM
thanks for all the comments, I write spontaneously so even I don't really plan what happens ! I'm writing a third and final part to this story, if you have any requests write to me at my email at the top =D
David S
12/4/16, 1:11 PM
Don't apologize for this being too long -- I think it is not long enough! :) Great story line, I hope you write more soon!
Kovu
12/4/16, 8:29 AM
Loved the reversal. Alpha back on top. ;) I love sneaks as well. Nothing hotter than a pair of White NZ Shox. Well, except maybe high top Supras or Osiris... ;) In a future story, I'd love you to add me in to it. Would be a hot fanatasy, I love your writing style!
Anonymous
12/4/16, 7:29 AM
I love your stories! Thanks for posting them!