Recent Comments

12/4/16, 1:53 PM
thanks for all the comments, I write spontaneously so even I don't really plan what happens ! I'm writing a third and final part to this story, if you have any requests write to me at my email at the top =D
David S
12/4/16, 1:11 PM
Don't apologize for this being too long -- I think it is not long enough! :) Great story line, I hope you write more soon!
Kovu
12/4/16, 8:29 AM
Loved the reversal. Alpha back on top. ;) I love sneaks as well. Nothing hotter than a pair of White NZ Shox. Well, except maybe high top Supras or Osiris... ;) In a future story, I'd love you to add me in to it. Would be a hot fanatasy, I love your writing style!
Anonymous
12/4/16, 7:29 AM
I love your stories! Thanks for posting them!
Anonymous
12/4/16, 5:48 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
12/4/16, 5:47 AM
First, the story is wonderful. It's a great read. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the first. Any criticism offered here is to help you work your craft. Merely using MSWord isn't enough. You need to use the spelling and grammar tools when you edit your stories. Writing the story is the fun, creative part. Editing is a bitch. You should not write and post a story on the same day. Write and let is sit. Next day, edit and let it sit. Third day, read it over a couple of times. You would be surprised how many errors you will catch on day 3. Spell check only finds mispelled words. You may have typed the word correctly, but it's wrong given the sentence you're trying to write. Having said all that -- keep up the good work.
Anonymous
12/4/16, 4:59 AM
This story was great. Keep it up
Viking Zombie Boyfriend
12/4/16, 4:38 AM
Super hot. Very well written and I loved the steady escalation of it as the dad transformed into a cruel master.
Viking Zombie Boyfriend
12/4/16, 4:21 AM
Thanks, guys! Yeah, my mind has some strange, dark corners, heh-heh! And yes, there are more stories in the pipeline.
Viking Zombie Boyfriend
12/4/16, 4:17 AM
Thanks, guys! I love this site... so many great authors here. I'll continue posting new stuff here and over at my "vikingzombieboyfriend" Tumblr blog, for sure.