Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/2/16, 5:07 AM
i love this keep going
Anonymous
12/2/16, 2:14 AM
So hot man! Love sneakers and looking forward to more! Maybe he can get some of his dominance back
Anonymous
12/2/16, 12:51 AM
Not really my thing, but interesting enough to keep me reading till the end. A neat concept.
12/1/16, 11:01 PM
You had a great, discriptive build up that lead to the expected (though appropriate) ending that felt a bit too rushed. Savor the tease, enjoy each step before you crack your bat and fire a home run. And once you do, stay in the afterglow as you round the bases, maybe tease out another pop as your transformed discovers the new world he's inhabiting. You're on the right path here, keep writing and I bet Baralai will appreciate the nod.
Sanchezinc
12/1/16, 9:46 PM
Great job, loved it
EdIam
12/1/16, 9:08 PM
Hey, man! I'll try to shoot for that! I have Monday and Tuesday off so I'll try to stay focused on the next chapter!
Anonymous
12/1/16, 8:18 PM
Love it. Love the subtlety of the growth and that for once the guy didn't become totally braindead and came to accept what was happening to him. Liked how the bat got brought up a few times and then ultimately was used to fuck him later on. Very hot story overall.
Pices142
12/1/16, 5:39 PM
Spectacular story. The fact it's your first makes me eager to see what else you have in store.
AeonFlux
12/1/16, 4:37 PM
Great......... But sure want to know why he changed........ Keep on writing