Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/2/16, 5:39 PM
hope to see part two soon
12/2/16, 2:45 PM
I am not a sneaker, but I love a good twist / reversal. This is really hot!
Anonymous
12/2/16, 11:05 AM
WOW ... JUST ... WOW
Anonymous
12/2/16, 5:07 AM
i love this keep going
Anonymous
12/2/16, 2:14 AM
So hot man! Love sneakers and looking forward to more! Maybe he can get some of his dominance back
Anonymous
12/2/16, 12:51 AM
Not really my thing, but interesting enough to keep me reading till the end. A neat concept.
12/1/16, 11:01 PM
You had a great, discriptive build up that lead to the expected (though appropriate) ending that felt a bit too rushed. Savor the tease, enjoy each step before you crack your bat and fire a home run. And once you do, stay in the afterglow as you round the bases, maybe tease out another pop as your transformed discovers the new world he's inhabiting. You're on the right path here, keep writing and I bet Baralai will appreciate the nod.
Sanchezinc
12/1/16, 9:46 PM
Great job, loved it
EdIam
12/1/16, 9:08 PM
Hey, man! I'll try to shoot for that! I have Monday and Tuesday off so I'll try to stay focused on the next chapter!