Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:43 AM
I sound like a broken record but ---- It's called "Spelling and Grammar" check on MSWord. Write your story. Do some editing, and then go to "Review" and tap on the "Spelling and Grammar". It will help you with some of the basics. The readers don't expect Hemingway, but when don't you even spend the time to capitalize the 'i', it tells me that you don't give a shit --- so why should I invest my time in reading the story. As for the subsance, it was a good first effort. Try harder next time -- but keep writing. Be creative. You'll get the hand of it.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/3/16, 5:40 AM
Love being Daddy's little boy. Never thought of building a custom Daddy of my own!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:38 AM
Interesting premise. Good writing!!
xORRiNx
12/3/16, 5:24 AM
Part 2 is coming along nicely. It's 40% complete. I think you'll all like it! Although... spoiler... he won't become gay. I'm sorry!
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:07 AM
great way of telling a story...love it...good work :-)
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:06 AM
I agree wow
Anonymous
12/2/16, 11:55 PM
I love it would love an follow up having them bound somehow ... pass the first night of passion. With some transformation
Anonymous
12/2/16, 10:54 PM
A pretty hot story, but in the future please break your stories into paragraphs. It is difficult to read a story that is just one paragraph.
Anonymous
12/2/16, 9:59 PM
Great work! Hopefully more Tod come. I love the way your daddy is going to be