Recent Comments

EdIam
12/1/16, 9:08 PM
Hey, man! I'll try to shoot for that! I have Monday and Tuesday off so I'll try to stay focused on the next chapter!
Anonymous
12/1/16, 8:18 PM
Love it. Love the subtlety of the growth and that for once the guy didn't become totally braindead and came to accept what was happening to him. Liked how the bat got brought up a few times and then ultimately was used to fuck him later on. Very hot story overall.
Pices142
12/1/16, 5:39 PM
Spectacular story. The fact it's your first makes me eager to see what else you have in store.
AeonFlux
12/1/16, 4:37 PM
Great......... But sure want to know why he changed........ Keep on writing
Anonymous
12/1/16, 3:10 PM
definitely a hot transformation! I was hoping for more dumbing down since you mention his IQ at the beginning, but I liked it a lot
cutlerfan
12/1/16, 10:24 AM
Cool story! I hope you write more!
Nov 28, 2016
Anonymous
12/1/16, 6:27 AM
Awesome start!!!
Nov 28, 2016
Anonymous
12/1/16, 6:11 AM
more?
Anonymous
12/1/16, 3:39 AM
so hot cant wait for more chapters
12/1/16, 2:28 AM
This is probably one of the best epic stories on this site. I have read it so many times. And it never fails to get me hard, and cumming.