Recent Comments

11/22/16, 9:01 PM
There will be much more upfront and explicit sex in the next episode, I hope it will inspire some nice wanking as well :) And thank you!
Ragnarok
11/22/16, 6:52 PM
I loved this story. I think it would be soo hott if you were to write a sequel to it with Brendan deciding to use the potion again but on Ian this time. That way the have a third to add to their sexy cam show life and home. ;)
Jockmorphr@yahoo.com
11/22/16, 5:27 PM
Screamingmoist, I agree with all of the positive feedback above. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Not only did it include a lot of physical and mental transformations I like, I thought you did a great job with the characters. You also provided a fun, fresh presentation of the "trope" that made the action in the story especially hot. Thanks for sharing your work with all of us! If you'd ever like to chat, just drop me a line.
11/22/16, 2:57 PM
Poor Corin. Anyway, this is getting better and better, an unusual topic on this site, somehow more than just a "wank story". Please continue it!
Zeph
11/22/16, 6:54 AM
Hot story
UchihaDEMS
11/22/16, 3:03 AM
Ah, genial. Esperaba con ansias la continuación.
cutlerfan
11/22/16, 12:40 AM
This is the end? it seem more like the beginning to story even larger in scope.
AeonFlux
11/21/16, 8:30 PM
Sehr geil geschrieben.......mit viel Liebe zum Detail....... Warte gespannt auf die Fortsetzung
Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:41 PM
I'm assuming your creating your document in MSWord. Go to 'Review", and then click, "Spelling & Grammar". That's a first level of edit. You will clean up so many errors easily and efficiently. Remember, editing is the key. Drafting is easy because it's the stream of consciousness on paper. Editing the stream makes it a story. Having said that --- this is going to be a hot series. I can tell.
Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:27 PM
I take it that the author is not fond of psychologists/therapists