Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:41 PM
I'm assuming your creating your document in MSWord. Go to 'Review", and then click, "Spelling & Grammar". That's a first level of edit. You will clean up so many errors easily and efficiently. Remember, editing is the key. Drafting is easy because it's the stream of consciousness on paper. Editing the stream makes it a story. Having said that --- this is going to be a hot series. I can tell.
Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:27 PM
I take it that the author is not fond of psychologists/therapists
Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:07 PM
One of your best yet.
Nov 18, 2016
Master C slave
11/21/16, 4:42 PM
waiting for part 2
Anonymous
11/21/16, 1:03 PM
Extremely well written! It's amazing how you play with sexual fantasies character developement. I really enjoyed ;) the drone avtivation scene but also felt deeply sympathetic for Corin and his situation. Keep going like this, I'm looking forward tomthe next chapter!
11/21/16, 12:39 PM
Thank you for finishing this story! Awesome as always. I have some thoughts, maybe I'll write them down and mail to you on the weekend.
Anonymous
11/21/16, 8:18 AM
Superb stuff
Nov 18, 2016
Anonymous
11/21/16, 6:18 AM
Holly crap that was hot
Anonymous
11/21/16, 4:32 AM
Loved it
Sexcrab
11/21/16, 1:49 AM
Wonderful. Basic, but wonderful.