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11/22/16, 9:48 PM
To Cliff: Thank you. Always feel free to write me. I'm always up for conversation and discussions. To cutlerfan: Yeah. That is the end. Anything after this would probably just be a repeat of what we've seen before. Men being programmed, men having sex, men becoming robots. I've already showed those scenes. And I can only show them so much before I know readers are going to get bored. So this is where the story ends. But yes ... the Think Tank would pretty much take over the world from here on out. I like to maybe have the reader imagine how that would play out. Let their imagination take the story from here. Anyways ... originally I actually started this story off as fan fiction. I obviously drew heavily on Star Trek's the Borg. When I watched Star Trek: TNG as a kid, I had many fantasies regarding the Borg. And I imagine how that all started. So this story was kind of my own fan fiction on their origin. Hence the name of the company and the division within the company: BioTech / Omnisystem's Research Group. And the first word obviously implying biology with technology. And the second word omni, which means "all" .. and system meaning that it will include all systems. Whether that means nothing will escape its grasp, or that it will go to all solar systems. Just a little word play I was throwing in there.
11/22/16, 9:01 PM
There will be much more upfront and explicit sex in the next episode, I hope it will inspire some nice wanking as well :) And thank you!
Ragnarok
11/22/16, 6:52 PM
I loved this story. I think it would be soo hott if you were to write a sequel to it with Brendan deciding to use the potion again but on Ian this time. That way the have a third to add to their sexy cam show life and home. ;)
Jockmorphr@yahoo.com
11/22/16, 5:27 PM
Screamingmoist, I agree with all of the positive feedback above. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Not only did it include a lot of physical and mental transformations I like, I thought you did a great job with the characters. You also provided a fun, fresh presentation of the "trope" that made the action in the story especially hot. Thanks for sharing your work with all of us! If you'd ever like to chat, just drop me a line.
11/22/16, 2:57 PM
Poor Corin. Anyway, this is getting better and better, an unusual topic on this site, somehow more than just a "wank story". Please continue it!
Zeph
11/22/16, 6:54 AM
Hot story
UchihaDEMS
11/22/16, 3:03 AM
Ah, genial. Esperaba con ansias la continuación.
cutlerfan
11/22/16, 12:40 AM
This is the end? it seem more like the beginning to story even larger in scope.
AeonFlux
11/21/16, 8:30 PM
Sehr geil geschrieben.......mit viel Liebe zum Detail....... Warte gespannt auf die Fortsetzung
Anonymous
11/21/16, 5:41 PM
I'm assuming your creating your document in MSWord. Go to 'Review", and then click, "Spelling & Grammar". That's a first level of edit. You will clean up so many errors easily and efficiently. Remember, editing is the key. Drafting is easy because it's the stream of consciousness on paper. Editing the stream makes it a story. Having said that --- this is going to be a hot series. I can tell.