Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/18/16, 5:35 AM
Loved reading every word!!
LongTimeFan
11/18/16, 4:42 AM
Short, sweet, and INSANELY hot. For some reason, apathy/absence of emotion is a huge turn-on for me, so this is right up my alley. Another home run, Hypnothrill!
Anonymous
11/18/16, 1:36 AM
I'm sorry, I could not get past the first few sentences. The grammar was terrible. I'm sure this is your first story so I'll be kind. Please proofread or have someone do it for you. I'm sure you have a great imagination, but if it doesn't translate on paper, then it's lost.
Anonymous
11/18/16, 12:34 AM
Wonderful. Great read, well done and well written! Loved every minute of it!
GrowingGeek
11/18/16, 12:01 AM
Also if you know where to get any of this magic potion stuff from Ukraine, spill the beans. My fantasy is living only for sex so this seems like a way to make that happen....
GrowingGeek
11/17/16, 11:50 PM
I wondered where you'd go from the last part - got to say I was a bit concerned the ending wouldn't live up to the rest. I was wrong - amazing work as always and a fitting end to a really good story. Great job!
M
11/17/16, 8:41 PM
Great story! I love the build up in every chapter. Keep the good work and I can't wait to read your next story.
Anonymous
11/17/16, 6:54 PM
Horribly written....structure and syntax mainly.... I was confused so many times. Sometime Keith was talking to himself, sometime to Marco but it was difficult to differentiate between the two... going from first to third person in the same text is a risky way of writing, it is more confusing than anything. I feel english might not be your primary language...
cutlerfan
11/17/16, 6:29 PM
Awesome story! i love a happy ending!
Anonymous
11/17/16, 10:39 AM
What a great story...exceptional work..thank you !!