Recent Comments

UchihaDEMS
11/19/16, 6:46 AM
Careful, you run into 1st and 3rd person on the story. Apart from that, its ok.
Anonymous
11/19/16, 12:57 AM
Just awesome! Thanks alot!
Jot
11/18/16, 11:59 PM
This story is great and should continue.
Joey
11/18/16, 10:27 PM
Thanks for reply, Screamingmoist. I'll be anxiously waiting your new stories, you're great!
May 2, 2005
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11/18/16, 7:09 PM
I'll never get bored reading this.
Anonymous
11/18/16, 4:27 PM
Hey. I really liked the story! Hopefully this gets continued!
screamingmoist
11/18/16, 3:40 PM
Thanks for the feedback! This one went on a bit longer than anticipated. I've never written a historically themed one before, so that could be an interesting challenge. I've got a few more in the hopper at the moment so we'll see what happens after those.
Ryder
11/18/16, 2:23 PM
Nice story! A great start to something that could get a 2nd part or be a stand alone! Keep it up Mr Dom! We need more sport gear/sneaker stories here ^_^
Anonymous
11/18/16, 7:18 AM
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Anonymous
11/18/16, 5:42 AM
Great story!! Now, we need to see how the boys work the streets.