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GrowingGeek
11/18/16, 12:01 AM
Also if you know where to get any of this magic potion stuff from Ukraine, spill the beans. My fantasy is living only for sex so this seems like a way to make that happen....
GrowingGeek
11/17/16, 11:50 PM
I wondered where you'd go from the last part - got to say I was a bit concerned the ending wouldn't live up to the rest. I was wrong - amazing work as always and a fitting end to a really good story. Great job!
M
11/17/16, 8:41 PM
Great story! I love the build up in every chapter. Keep the good work and I can't wait to read your next story.
Anonymous
11/17/16, 6:54 PM
Horribly written....structure and syntax mainly.... I was confused so many times. Sometime Keith was talking to himself, sometime to Marco but it was difficult to differentiate between the two... going from first to third person in the same text is a risky way of writing, it is more confusing than anything. I feel english might not be your primary language...
cutlerfan
11/17/16, 6:29 PM
Awesome story! i love a happy ending!
Anonymous
11/17/16, 10:39 AM
What a great story...exceptional work..thank you !!
Joey
11/17/16, 10:06 AM
PERFECT!!!!! Oh, man, this story is great!! Thank you very much! This is one of my favourites. I love how effeminate and silly both straight guys were turned in the end. Keep writing! you're very talented. Would you consider to make a similar story, setted up in the old west, or a ranch, please? that's a big fantasy that I have: turn a brave gunman, a group of manly cowboys, or a reckless sheriff and his assistant, into limp-wristed effeminate boys, but saddly, I've never found a good story in that scenario!
GrowingGeek
11/17/16, 7:13 AM
Another great chapter - looking forward to chapter 3 but I'll be sorry to see it end! Really good job
Anonymous
11/17/16, 6:36 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Joey
11/17/16, 3:26 AM
Oh, my God!! This is even better than the first chapter! I love that Brendan is concious of the changes that he and Tyler are suffering, and how he feels internal embarrassment for his girly behavior. The description and narrative is perfect, is fantastic how they're becoming increasingly ditzy and effeminate. I love this story, thanks for the quick update.