Recent Comments

screamingmoist
11/18/16, 3:40 PM
Thanks for the feedback! This one went on a bit longer than anticipated. I've never written a historically themed one before, so that could be an interesting challenge. I've got a few more in the hopper at the moment so we'll see what happens after those.
Ryder
11/18/16, 2:23 PM
Nice story! A great start to something that could get a 2nd part or be a stand alone! Keep it up Mr Dom! We need more sport gear/sneaker stories here ^_^
Anonymous
11/18/16, 7:18 AM
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Anonymous
11/18/16, 5:42 AM
Great story!! Now, we need to see how the boys work the streets.
Anonymous
11/18/16, 5:35 AM
Loved reading every word!!
LongTimeFan
11/18/16, 4:42 AM
Short, sweet, and INSANELY hot. For some reason, apathy/absence of emotion is a huge turn-on for me, so this is right up my alley. Another home run, Hypnothrill!
Anonymous
11/18/16, 1:36 AM
I'm sorry, I could not get past the first few sentences. The grammar was terrible. I'm sure this is your first story so I'll be kind. Please proofread or have someone do it for you. I'm sure you have a great imagination, but if it doesn't translate on paper, then it's lost.
Anonymous
11/18/16, 12:34 AM
Wonderful. Great read, well done and well written! Loved every minute of it!
GrowingGeek
11/18/16, 12:01 AM
Also if you know where to get any of this magic potion stuff from Ukraine, spill the beans. My fantasy is living only for sex so this seems like a way to make that happen....
GrowingGeek
11/17/16, 11:50 PM
I wondered where you'd go from the last part - got to say I was a bit concerned the ending wouldn't live up to the rest. I was wrong - amazing work as always and a fitting end to a really good story. Great job!