Recent Comments

Joey
11/17/16, 3:26 AM
Oh, my God!! This is even better than the first chapter! I love that Brendan is concious of the changes that he and Tyler are suffering, and how he feels internal embarrassment for his girly behavior. The description and narrative is perfect, is fantastic how they're becoming increasingly ditzy and effeminate. I love this story, thanks for the quick update.
Anonymous
11/17/16, 2:07 AM
I would love to borrow you consept and re-write it to show which details I would like you to pay attention to. Give the go ahead and i'll do it!
Anonymous
11/17/16, 1:18 AM
yesssssss
Anonymous
11/17/16, 12:25 AM
Terrific
Anonymous
11/16/16, 11:30 PM
Oh my god, this is sooo hot!
GrowingGeek
11/16/16, 11:04 PM
Awesome start, can't wait to see where it goes!
Anonymous
11/16/16, 11:01 PM
You are an amazing writer, I cannot wait for the last part!!!
Anonymous
11/16/16, 10:39 PM
Wow amazing! Really enjoyed part 1!
11/16/16, 10:11 PM
I always love reading your stuff - your excellent writing has inspired more than a few of my own stories. Excellent work!
screamingmoist
11/16/16, 10:10 PM
Thanks for reading! Glad people are enjoying it so far.