Recent Comments

cutlerfan
11/15/16, 1:30 PM
I see it is going somewhere now. The story is a striking combination of rough manipulation and subtle bio-physical control. I have an idea how it may end at least in part. P.S.- I'm still thinking about your earlier comment about what a positive ending would be. Sorry, trying to figure it out for myself as well as you since I write a little fiction myself. . If you prefer I could email you my response when I am finished.
11/15/16, 12:46 PM
A really interesting and hot start, plz keep going!
Anonymous
11/15/16, 10:43 AM
One of the best orgasms before bed I've ever had!!!!
11/14/16, 10:57 PM
a clever piece of writing - thank you.
RobinHood70
11/14/16, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the compliments, everyone! @Cliff: It's Peter, actually. :) But yes, he definitely does play with fire...and we all know how that phrase ends!
Anonymous
11/14/16, 3:59 PM
Loved this story! The transition, the slow changes, the refusal to accept the changes. So hot!!!
Anonymous
11/14/16, 3:04 PM
Niiiice
11/14/16, 12:15 PM
Not much punishment for Darius, lol. These fallen angels are so talent to create the win-win scenarios.
11/14/16, 12:12 PM
It's always interesting to see how Paul stripped the victims' inhibitions and find their own weak points. Paul really liked to play fire!
11/14/16, 12:08 PM
These changes are really smooth and hot !