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Anonymous
11/12/16, 4:16 PM
so hot...
Anonymous
11/12/16, 8:57 AM
Hot as ever. The range of modes could gradually be increased - maybe 'drunk 'n horny' for a normally teetotal health freak? But just take it in whatever direction you like - you know what you're doing! (So my dick confirms.)
11/12/16, 6:02 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Peter!
JasCo
11/12/16, 3:42 AM
Yeah! Bottom Bros!
Anonymous
11/12/16, 3:14 AM
I loved the story. I love men being himbos. It is a great idea renting by group. I'd like to see what UchihaDEMS said (group of nerds renting the coach (or coaches of different teams (or a school team)) for a party or something like that) All of them in aware mode, that would be really really hot!
Anonymous
11/12/16, 2:35 AM
Bravo!
Anonymous
11/12/16, 12:54 AM
Wonderful story! II also love that a young dominate an old man. For the next you can make a young controls an old man in aware mode by making him think he's his dad. That would be amazing!
tomozco
11/11/16, 10:01 PM
Good ending to the series, although it would have been good to find out more about the team's transformation and the more advanced "trainings" that they went through before being sold off. Where also have the other teammates been assigned to, it just seems that with all the sex training it'd be fun to see some of the guys make use of it... but that's just me being greedy :p The fake accident and dead team plot seems to be a common idea used by many, including myself.... I've used a similar plot in the "MCP Research Institute" series. ;)
LongtimeFan
11/11/16, 8:43 PM
Ha ha, Topaz isn't the first to use that trick! Any time a mystery writer puts down that "the body/bodies was/were unrecognizable," you know that the ol' corpse switcheroo has happened. :p
11/11/16, 8:19 PM
To Chase Darksyde: I believe you're thinking of "Reset". Again, I experimented with my writing by trying to tell the same story from three different POV. I think that story turned out very well. It's very simple, and has more and more reveals as you learn the different points of view. One of my favorites. To Cliff: I would like to continue this conversation when the story finishes. I don't want to talk too much about it now, because I'm afraid I'll spoil the ending. But again, I'll be curious if this story will fulfill. To everyone else: thank you all for your encouragement, and you high praise regarding my stories. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. That probably won't be until Sunday or Monday. I have a busy weekend ahead, and I'm trying to get a moment to get the next chapter written up. So stay tuned. However, I don't plan doing a follow up to either Reset or Sidetracked. I consider these stories finished. However, I have thought about going back to The Alignment. I never finished this story. One of the readers criticized it for having incestuous elements. And that criticism sorta threw me off track. And I never finished what I started. That's always bothered me. I'll get back to that story some day.