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Anonymous
11/12/16, 12:54 AM
Wonderful story! II also love that a young dominate an old man. For the next you can make a young controls an old man in aware mode by making him think he's his dad. That would be amazing!
tomozco
11/11/16, 10:01 PM
Good ending to the series, although it would have been good to find out more about the team's transformation and the more advanced "trainings" that they went through before being sold off. Where also have the other teammates been assigned to, it just seems that with all the sex training it'd be fun to see some of the guys make use of it... but that's just me being greedy :p The fake accident and dead team plot seems to be a common idea used by many, including myself.... I've used a similar plot in the "MCP Research Institute" series. ;)
LongtimeFan
11/11/16, 8:43 PM
Ha ha, Topaz isn't the first to use that trick! Any time a mystery writer puts down that "the body/bodies was/were unrecognizable," you know that the ol' corpse switcheroo has happened. :p
11/11/16, 8:19 PM
To Chase Darksyde: I believe you're thinking of "Reset". Again, I experimented with my writing by trying to tell the same story from three different POV. I think that story turned out very well. It's very simple, and has more and more reveals as you learn the different points of view. One of my favorites. To Cliff: I would like to continue this conversation when the story finishes. I don't want to talk too much about it now, because I'm afraid I'll spoil the ending. But again, I'll be curious if this story will fulfill. To everyone else: thank you all for your encouragement, and you high praise regarding my stories. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. That probably won't be until Sunday or Monday. I have a busy weekend ahead, and I'm trying to get a moment to get the next chapter written up. So stay tuned. However, I don't plan doing a follow up to either Reset or Sidetracked. I consider these stories finished. However, I have thought about going back to The Alignment. I never finished this story. One of the readers criticized it for having incestuous elements. And that criticism sorta threw me off track. And I never finished what I started. That's always bothered me. I'll get back to that story some day.
UchihaDEMS
11/11/16, 6:44 PM
Oh sweet, the smaller one domination the big one, I love that, its very rare to see those kind of thing, usually they are the same or the owner is like bigger or powerful, blah blah blah. Thanks for this! I would love to see a son renting his dad or a group of nerds renting the abusive coach. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
11/11/16, 6:26 PM
Really missing your writing, xORRiNx :( I could really use some of it right now haha. Been a bad week. But i hope all is well for you.
StoryLove321
11/11/16, 5:33 PM
Ok I have to say... I have loved every single one of these chapters! and pls go on... I would love to see a scenario where... a dad activated a son or something... and I also wanted to say THANK YOU for writing in my suggestion about a father at his kid's play! :) that's very sweet of you! <3 (and in case its a coincidence, awesome job anyway :P) Keep it UP!
Anonymous
11/11/16, 5:02 PM
I hope the next story would switch roles you know the one being controlled dominates the client. Those kind of stories are kinda rare. But this is as usual hot as fuck.
Master C's slave
11/11/16, 3:47 PM
got me hook on this story, cant wait for the next Chapter and find out what happen Garrett and Mike and John
Anonymous
11/11/16, 1:07 PM
LOL for the dumb down republican politician! Really a good mode.