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11/11/16, 8:19 PM
To Chase Darksyde: I believe you're thinking of "Reset". Again, I experimented with my writing by trying to tell the same story from three different POV. I think that story turned out very well. It's very simple, and has more and more reveals as you learn the different points of view. One of my favorites. To Cliff: I would like to continue this conversation when the story finishes. I don't want to talk too much about it now, because I'm afraid I'll spoil the ending. But again, I'll be curious if this story will fulfill. To everyone else: thank you all for your encouragement, and you high praise regarding my stories. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. That probably won't be until Sunday or Monday. I have a busy weekend ahead, and I'm trying to get a moment to get the next chapter written up. So stay tuned. However, I don't plan doing a follow up to either Reset or Sidetracked. I consider these stories finished. However, I have thought about going back to The Alignment. I never finished this story. One of the readers criticized it for having incestuous elements. And that criticism sorta threw me off track. And I never finished what I started. That's always bothered me. I'll get back to that story some day.
UchihaDEMS
11/11/16, 6:44 PM
Oh sweet, the smaller one domination the big one, I love that, its very rare to see those kind of thing, usually they are the same or the owner is like bigger or powerful, blah blah blah. Thanks for this! I would love to see a son renting his dad or a group of nerds renting the abusive coach. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
11/11/16, 6:26 PM
Really missing your writing, xORRiNx :( I could really use some of it right now haha. Been a bad week. But i hope all is well for you.
StoryLove321
11/11/16, 5:33 PM
Ok I have to say... I have loved every single one of these chapters! and pls go on... I would love to see a scenario where... a dad activated a son or something... and I also wanted to say THANK YOU for writing in my suggestion about a father at his kid's play! :) that's very sweet of you! <3 (and in case its a coincidence, awesome job anyway :P) Keep it UP!
Anonymous
11/11/16, 5:02 PM
I hope the next story would switch roles you know the one being controlled dominates the client. Those kind of stories are kinda rare. But this is as usual hot as fuck.
Master C's slave
11/11/16, 3:47 PM
got me hook on this story, cant wait for the next Chapter and find out what happen Garrett and Mike and John
Anonymous
11/11/16, 1:07 PM
LOL for the dumb down republican politician! Really a good mode.
Cliff
11/11/16, 12:59 PM
To rubbrsome: Just my two cents, 1. Those flashbacks made your chars more vivid, so if they encountered something "bad", I felt sorry, especially John and Mike seems like good guys. 2. As for "bad", there went your question: what means a positive purpose and an overall benefit? For me, it's about: a) Happy ever after, closet cases come out by mc, like "Satyr in the Woods" b) If someone was manipulated, just like most themes of mc stories, I'd like to see some silver lining. Like "Moon buddy" ,and many straight to gay and become lover stories. c) In other darker stories, I could accept a good Master / Slave / Happy Victim theme, because I know now someone would "want" it even "choose" it, at least he would be happy in a non-traditional way, like "Bad Pharma". d) For those humiliate stories, most times there is a bully to punish, or the theme is too ridiculous to feel emotional about those char. They were objectified to symbols, and I didn't think it would happen, so I cared nothing about them. All in all, I want to congrats you trying some new writing technique, I especially how every chapter end, just like the TV film episode, stop at the most intriguing point. And you create some wonderful chars, make me hope them having good lives. So glad see you create another masterpiece !
Anonymous
11/11/16, 12:29 PM
I love it Man thanks!!
11/11/16, 11:40 AM
I wish I could take credit for the bus crash detail, LongtimeFan. I actually borrowed that little plot twist from Chapter 7 of Topaz 172's "Various Techniques." And if anyone is bummed out by what happens to Carl and Aaron the end of this story, then check out my main inspiration, Chapter 15 of "Various Techniques" (http://mcstories.com/VariousTechniques/VariousTechniques15.html) for an alternate ending.