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bklyn_cub
11/11/16, 2:11 AM
great story, great mystery, great pacing. i think people are primed to want their content all at once is all -- "binge" culture.
11/11/16, 1:50 AM
Thanks rubbrsome for your kindly reply! I'll wait for the whole story, surprise and twist. Best wishes !
cutlerfan
11/10/16, 11:43 PM
I'm willing to wait..it's just I need to see a reason...a purpose...a positive benefit in this. Sorry.
pigmen
11/10/16, 10:09 PM
Keep it up Rubbrsome. Amazing as ever.
Nov 7, 2016
11/10/16, 6:19 PM
I don't have any intention of making a part two right now, and having looked up Derek's story... it doesn't seem that similar
11/10/16, 5:27 PM
To Cliff: You are making an assumption that the corporation is corrupt. To cutlerfan: The story hasn't concluded yet. Just because the current chapters don't give the reason for the Think Tank's integration of John, doesn't mean there isn't a reason. You need to be patient, wait for all the chapters to post and then pass judgement. I'm not saying that you'll be satisfied with my reason. I'm only saying that there is, indeed, a purpose to all this. I have a plan and a direction for this story. It just takes a little while to get to that end-point. Think of Think Tank as a mystery. If I revealed the answers to that mystery in the early chapters, then there's no intrigue. The story is boring. So then... what really is the point in reading? Usually, answers are revealed in the final chapter. And it is coming. Expect the reveal to happen in Chapter 6, and everything laid bare in the epilogue.
Blake1970
11/10/16, 5:23 PM
Where are you, Philip???!!! Where is the next chapter???!!! :)
cutlerfan
11/10/16, 1:24 PM
So he's just part of the Think Tank...forever? What's the point of enslaving these men? I can't see any good in this.
11/10/16, 12:23 PM
Arousingly scaring, the process is really detailed, what a way to be integrated! Hope John would rest in endless orgasms. On a side note, I hate to see some corrupt corporation tricked good guys :(
Gs01123
11/10/16, 10:45 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments, and part two will be coming soon :D