Recent Comments

Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/10/16, 6:08 AM
It's close to "My Roommate", but there's a brute thing about this story. Having said that, this reads as a one installment piece. Not every story on this site has to be episodic.
Anonymous
11/10/16, 4:35 AM
Is the Epilogue ever coming?
Master C's slave
11/10/16, 1:16 AM
when its part 2 coming
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/9/16, 11:21 PM
This is exactly the type of story I come to this site for. Clueless transformation.
tomozco
11/9/16, 10:38 PM
Very interesting, what's the real intent behind this Habitat? Looking forward to the next part!
TheWanderer
11/9/16, 6:10 PM
His naked when he woke up didn't he? And he doesn't mind, does he? =w= Nice~
Nov 7, 2016
Rehash but still hot
11/9/16, 3:41 PM
This is a rehash of Derek William's My Roommate Calls me Nicknames, but still hot.
11/9/16, 1:28 PM
Doing great!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:59 PM
Haven't read anything entirely like fhis before. I like the way you've made this story parody the actual sims games and how "glitchy" they can be. The way they zone out before perfoming their actions and such is fun to imagine happening in real life. So has this technology infected everyone through mobile device or what causes their irl counterparts to react when they presumably have never played the same thing? Is it a world wide sentient AI that likes to use humans for its pleasures? Whatever it is, keep it up.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:43 PM
Creative writing --- you're telling a story. If I have to use my imagination for every little detail, where's the creativity?