Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:59 PM
Haven't read anything entirely like fhis before. I like the way you've made this story parody the actual sims games and how "glitchy" they can be. The way they zone out before perfoming their actions and such is fun to imagine happening in real life. So has this technology infected everyone through mobile device or what causes their irl counterparts to react when they presumably have never played the same thing? Is it a world wide sentient AI that likes to use humans for its pleasures? Whatever it is, keep it up.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:43 PM
Creative writing --- you're telling a story. If I have to use my imagination for every little detail, where's the creativity?
Anonymous
11/8/16, 8:49 PM
I love your writing style, this story especially. I get wood just by imagining what the conclusion will be like.
UchihaDEMS
11/8/16, 6:44 PM
A little bit cringy but acceptable, I want to know where this will be going. I would love to see more slaves added, like more pals of the football team or even adults like the coach or the dad of Eric! That would be very hot!
Master C's slave
11/8/16, 6:21 PM
interesting story, is there going to be a Part 2
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:31 PM
looking forward to more stories.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:05 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:49 PM
wonderful. So glad you've gotten back to writing. Can't wait for the rest of this!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:34 PM
Good story nice start. Like to read more!!
11/8/16, 1:18 PM
The cliffhanger...please continue it soon ! BTW, Not only Garret, but also John & Mike both have some special talents, so I guessed the purpose of the habitat is to get great minds and integrated them in a big hive/database for whatever devious reason.