Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:31 PM
looking forward to more stories.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:05 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:49 PM
wonderful. So glad you've gotten back to writing. Can't wait for the rest of this!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:34 PM
Good story nice start. Like to read more!!
11/8/16, 1:18 PM
The cliffhanger...please continue it soon ! BTW, Not only Garret, but also John & Mike both have some special talents, so I guessed the purpose of the habitat is to get great minds and integrated them in a big hive/database for whatever devious reason.
Kyle
11/8/16, 11:27 AM
Excellent set of stories! Well done. And thank you.
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 10:18 AM
Doesn't really make sense how his mind got fucked...but came to it anyway XD
Kyle
11/8/16, 7:30 AM
Fantastic addition. Love the world building, making sense that men would try to have as many kids as they can before their change. Love that our two travellers haven't been conditioned to respond to Rationall and their pheromones instantly overwhelm the natives into primal rutting. Great addition. Looking forward to the next instalment to see where things go.
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 7:03 AM
This needs a sequel like asap
Nachtigall
11/8/16, 5:34 AM
I see a lot of potential in this story. It would be interesting if Marcus could alter Eric's memories using the chip. Also, a bit more details as to how the chip was attached to Eric would help.