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Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 10:18 AM
Doesn't really make sense how his mind got fucked...but came to it anyway XD
Kyle
11/8/16, 7:30 AM
Fantastic addition. Love the world building, making sense that men would try to have as many kids as they can before their change. Love that our two travellers haven't been conditioned to respond to Rationall and their pheromones instantly overwhelm the natives into primal rutting. Great addition. Looking forward to the next instalment to see where things go.
Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 7:03 AM
This needs a sequel like asap
Nachtigall
11/8/16, 5:34 AM
I see a lot of potential in this story. It would be interesting if Marcus could alter Eric's memories using the chip. Also, a bit more details as to how the chip was attached to Eric would help.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:15 AM
Amazing, as usual. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:04 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 3:52 AM
I hope that Maybe they notice the phone and get him under that way
11/8/16, 3:20 AM
I probably will have a concluding chapter just to wrap things up...but my main focus is still my other story. Life got in the way of this one, I should finish it up!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:26 AM
Put them in the football helmets
A San Francisco Reader
11/7/16, 9:48 PM
Would also like the 'chip' to be used to change the roommates memories, therefore changing his behavior even when he's in 'normal mode'...Slowly turning him 'Gay' in actions & behavior, while keeping him 'clueless' would be nice....