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Nov 7, 2016
Anonymous
11/8/16, 7:03 AM
This needs a sequel like asap
Nachtigall
11/8/16, 5:34 AM
I see a lot of potential in this story. It would be interesting if Marcus could alter Eric's memories using the chip. Also, a bit more details as to how the chip was attached to Eric would help.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:15 AM
Amazing, as usual. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 5:04 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 3:52 AM
I hope that Maybe they notice the phone and get him under that way
11/8/16, 3:20 AM
I probably will have a concluding chapter just to wrap things up...but my main focus is still my other story. Life got in the way of this one, I should finish it up!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:26 AM
Put them in the football helmets
A San Francisco Reader
11/7/16, 9:48 PM
Would also like the 'chip' to be used to change the roommates memories, therefore changing his behavior even when he's in 'normal mode'...Slowly turning him 'Gay' in actions & behavior, while keeping him 'clueless' would be nice....
Null0byte
11/7/16, 8:29 PM
Very interesting. Makes on wonder what Mike's experience would be like. Would Mike and Jake get to be together again? What is the purpose of the habitat? Is it all just an elaborate ruse to get brilliant bodies (John & Mike) and brilliant minds (Garret) down in there, to what end? Driven Garrett's predilection to avoid human contact, woul he just be subsumed by the machine in the purpose on enhancing its abilities? The mind boggles.
tom
11/7/16, 8:09 PM
great start...like to see where u go from here