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suitedsubmissive
11/5/16, 11:36 PM
This story made my little pig cock so hard!!
Anonymous
11/5/16, 10:31 PM
This is too hot! Thanks alot man! Cant wait for the next one!
TrevorTist
11/5/16, 7:08 PM
Thanks Jock. I'm not so much into the himbo-ification aspect, but I'll see if I can do something. Feel free to shoot any other ideas to me at trevortist1 at gmail dot com.
TrevorTist
11/5/16, 6:59 PM
I considered Owen as the client, but in my mind John's services are highly specialized and therefore very expensive. Not anyone can afford the many thousands of dollars it costs to rent a stud. Given that the service is discovered only through word of mouth or direct engagement with John, I'm not sure how Owen would figure out about the service. I'll think about ways to make it work and see if I can come up with a story line. If anyone wants to be my editor, I'm happy to take them on. I read through the story three times, but I'm not always going to catch everything.
TrevorTist
11/5/16, 6:54 PM
I thought about how I could get the missionaries in on the action, but they were talking with Matt, not John. Thanks for noticing the attention to detail. I know a little about a lot of things, and what I don't know I'm willing to take a few minutes to research. I like making the details as accurate as possible, even if the premise of the story is completely implausible.
Peter D----
11/5/16, 6:13 PM
This guy is an accomplished homoerotic author, with the detail and some clever cross-referencing he almost sucks you (bad pun, sorry) into the tale and that rear part of me that I reserve for special friends (I'm chiefly a Top) actually got aroused by some of his more graphic descriptions. He has been very generous with his time on here and I hope he invents a Sequel. Yes, hyno-sex is addictive!
Anonymous
11/5/16, 5:22 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/5/16, 5:18 PM
Content is great. The story is hot. Spend a little time editing. It'll make it more readable.
Anonymous
11/5/16, 5:10 PM
It's a good thing this is fiction!!!
Anonymous
11/5/16, 5:08 PM
Getting better by the minute!!!