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Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:25 PM
Well done. Great wrap up.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:08 PM
Very good story. Well done. Lots of cool angles to explore if you continue (which many of us hope you do).
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:39 PM
Would also love to see Alex really make the cop's really corrupt, turning them into real 'bad guy's, who get their kicks beating-up others, robbing, breaking & entering, etc. Since Alex was into drugs, they could become drug pushers as well ! ???????
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:28 PM
I totally agree with the comment of StoryLove Write about a married hunk in awere mode! And also, i fantasy about a big "party" of many rich people that hire many "aware guys" to act like their waiters or like their couple and present them to their friends.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 2:55 PM
Wow...what a great story...Love the "Sliders" references
Master C's slave
11/2/16, 1:34 PM
wish i was either Matt or Nate and be taken over by Jax the Satyr
Anonymous
11/2/16, 12:14 PM
part three PLEEEAAASSSSEEE
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 9:47 AM
Wow! You are a longtime fan, LongtimeFan, because I didn't even realize I was reusing the name "Coach Briggs." I was actually thinking about calling the character "Coach Riggs," but something about the name "Briggs" must just appeal to my subconscious. And yes, I enjoy doing the slow build of erotic tension...and over the next two sections, the erotic content of this story should build and build.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 9:26 AM
This is an awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
LongtimeFan
11/2/16, 7:43 AM
Me again! This is another great story--as the above poster said, the slow transformation is incredibly hot. Plus, the way the drugs are affecting the players one by one, spreading gradually...yes. Also, fun little question: you mention that a "Coach Briggs" has left the school in the first part of the story; that's the same name as the coach in "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal" ("Coach Briggs came out in nothing but these tiny blue satin shorts..."). Was that intentional? Or do you just like the name? :p