Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/2/16, 12:14 PM
part three PLEEEAAASSSSEEE
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 9:47 AM
Wow! You are a longtime fan, LongtimeFan, because I didn't even realize I was reusing the name "Coach Briggs." I was actually thinking about calling the character "Coach Riggs," but something about the name "Briggs" must just appeal to my subconscious. And yes, I enjoy doing the slow build of erotic tension...and over the next two sections, the erotic content of this story should build and build.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 9:26 AM
This is an awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
LongtimeFan
11/2/16, 7:43 AM
Me again! This is another great story--as the above poster said, the slow transformation is incredibly hot. Plus, the way the drugs are affecting the players one by one, spreading gradually...yes. Also, fun little question: you mention that a "Coach Briggs" has left the school in the first part of the story; that's the same name as the coach in "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal" ("Coach Briggs came out in nothing but these tiny blue satin shorts..."). Was that intentional? Or do you just like the name? :p
Bateriam
11/2/16, 7:20 AM
Hey Man. Really liked your story. Made me hard more than once. You handled the mind control well It mixed the fear element with the satyr(s) not being aggressively violent. He/They did not simply "plow into" the satyr-to-be to finalize the transformations.
StoryLove321
11/2/16, 5:41 AM
I loved this concept for the story! Please write more! I'll be looking forward to it! Personally could we see (out of the options you wrote above) A Young, Married Hunk with Kids on "aware" mode! OMG something like he'd leave in the middle of family dinner or better yet... his KID'S SCHOOL PLAY in the MIDDLE OF HIS KID'S PERFORMANCE!!!I would LOVE to read that! that's literally my FAVORITE thing but aren't a lot of stories like that... if you know any more stories like that let me know :D
Anonymous
11/2/16, 5:16 AM
It's the slow transformation that makes it hot!!
Anonymous
11/2/16, 4:01 AM
Excellent! Perfect End to a great series! Really enjoyed every bit of it!
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:41 AM
Oh, it's so chilling... love this kind of thrilling stories. Choosing a third-person narrative makes the story really cold-blooded and looks so effective plus hot!!
11/2/16, 2:39 AM
Awesome!! Keep it going!!!