I love it thanks!

I really love the idea of a skinsuit TF story told from the perspective of the skinsuit. The idea of being just a thin piece of skin stretched out over someone else entirely filling you out is certainly bizarre. I imagine having to keep up appearances to the outside world while knowing that you're just a skinsuit to be very mind boggling.

Loving this series. I liked the transformation scene, thought I wouldn't have minded hearing more of the protagonists thoughts while he was being put on.

@darkblade2814 With how gil is at this point, the only way he will change is if somebody in his family draws a line. It's what doomed him, so it is fitting such will save him to an extent. I think seeing gil forced to think about the darker aspects of western society that made Hans leave and later Marky will likely make him remember how he once was, force him to evaluate what the formation of their paradise cost even as they gained, and possibly remember ruby and her warnings- because her mentioning of beasthood being forced ks exactly what eddie brings up (I doubt you'll bring her up, but I headcanon her to either have been transformed or having lived her life imprisoned as a human till she died, remaining loyal to the dawn- being a ghost in the narrative for Rudolf and gil both). I suspect that even had she been transformed, something tells me she'd probably pull a Hans and leave- her conviction and duty make up major parts, and if she did transform, it would be out of a desire to see that duty (in relation to compassion) actualized better in the west. If the west can't do that, wolfheik isn't worth it anymore. Either that, or she died a comfortable hostage as a human. But since ruby's fate is ambiguous by design, this is moreso a personal headcanon for me. Regardless, seeing gil making that introspection would be fascinafing- the societies of the beastfolk and demons and the like have some understandable motives, but often go into excesses that are dangerous and eerie. Seeing gil being forced to come to terms to that- even if only a little in relation to why such practices drove his children away and threaten to split his family apart- would be an intriguing cycle hack to who he once was. All I can say is- I can imagine if gil realizes who the grandmaster is he's going to not be feeling so good or at the very least mildly uncomfortable- if the grandmaster winds up causing a magical catastrophe thanks to the traumas he experienced dying in the beastfolk-east battle all those years ago, that's going to be complicated to navigate. The reality is that the westerners are going to face consequences- the demons are there, they are growing, and once they topple the king- woflheim is right there. Even now, the beastfolk are just concerned over Aaron, but the reality is that if things get even worse- Aaron might not even be around anymore- I shudder to think what gregory has planned for them- his vicious vow in chapter 3 is an eerie foreshadowing of what is to come.

Found the son’s remolding into a chronically masturbating virgin surprisingly hot. Good dose of humiliation throughout!

Fucking brilliant. Great story with so many possibilities. Can hardly wait.

Odd continuity issue. Tom has been out of college 10 years and is 23?

Great start!

Like others, I like that Alex is aware. I'm curious what happened to Rob. Did something from the box/light/etc do something to change Rob into this dominant self-serving guy? I can see where he might be really into this just because even without a change to him. - I suspect that there could be something bad coming out of Alex dropping trou on Derek. But, on the other hand, I could see Derek not doing anything but also finding Alex interesting and attractive and wondering if the pants thing was a come on to him. - It seems like this is going to continue for Alex and Rob hasn't thought of telling him not to respond to anyone else (which is also an easy out probably). But if Rob is able to do all these things to Alex and even have Alex not remember it later, what's to stop Derek from doing that? Or even someone on the street? Having him do things out of character, smoke, drink, cheat, whatever... Lots of possible things here. Great story. And what about the old man and what does D.Will mean? etc

@darkblade2814 I think it makes sense that the north and the west are cordial, seeing how they managed to get help from one of the lionfolk, but I can see that if the western beastfolk continue to get more unhinged and start throwing themselves into war with the demons they will back off and either go neutral or the like. So long as the beastfolk of the west do not go too ojt of control or act in ways that could endanger the north (inciting the demons to try to go there) they will likely remain cordial. But if not...the north would likely isolate itself or go on the defensive. The north with dealing with the arboreal and the destructor already knows how dangerous getting run over by two competing factions is, a lesson the east and west are likely going to learn in a very terrible manner (that of war). I can see amidst this that the primal beast might wind up trying to use somebody as an asset, as you've mentioned of markys son, causing him to potentially leave the west to save his son. Gil by that point i fear will have drunk the kool aid too well- he and his brothers and father. Ironically, Hans and Marky in doing so wind up kind of embodying the notions of compassion ruby and Collin hold to- though not directly- moreso its northern influence than eastern here (eastern cilture as a whole seems to have become very repressive and tailored to the benefits of the rich- leaving a desire for pleasure and freedom and open weak point- the grandmaster due to his trauma and his darker acfions and the kings follies aren't helping either- though collin serves as an exception to this.) In my mind, the Wolfmen of the west are going to learn temperance, but it will be a painful realization amidst war and loss- the demons seem to be physically incapable of doing so- but something tells me they cant win forever either- any thing that rises must also fall. The north have already been made to learn it, so they know what to do and what not to do. I strongly suspect that what the destructor was for the northerners in learning restraint, the conflict with the demons will be for the western beastfolk. The order has collapsed, Collin and Eddie are likely in for some horrible times, the grandmaster might wind up with necromancy gone wrong- worst case scenario here is a disastrous war that ruins both nations to the point of collapse, and the ensuing people who remain fleeing or invading other areas (I'm drawing a bit from the bronze age collapse here in how things could proceed worst case scenario.)