Recent Comments

10/30/16, 12:37 PM
Wonderful build-up and new tension! I love this story!
Kyle
10/30/16, 11:41 AM
Scudder, I adored "The Planet of Desire" series. Great to see another fan. As for this story, I agree that "unintelligible" is a gross exaggeration and entirely unfair. A few typos but we all make those. Baralai, great story. Really enjoy your work and, as others have already said, imaginative, creative and well done. And a great length too. Congratulations on another great piece.
10/30/16, 5:24 AM
The lovechild of Into the Woods and The Planet of Desire series by Tommyhawk (look for it on Nifty if you don't know it!) Brilliant idea!
Anonymous
10/30/16, 3:17 AM
I like the irony of the last bit of the story, where the Storyteller's like 'nah only world hoppers get turned into forest bimbos' when in actuality he could make literally anyone a forest slut with a story. I'd love to see a story that plays that up, where the recipient is completely naive of what's happening to him cause 'it could only ever happen to outsiders'
10/30/16, 1:36 AM
Oh and I think some of the strong criticism over the grammar is a bit much. I actually didn't notice that much, and I certainly wouldn't say any of it was "unintelligible". Pull more men from the real world into this realm please!
10/30/16, 1:33 AM
Wow. Very different and a great read. DEFINITELY not "children's lit" and thinking it is is quite ridiculous. I'd be very concerned if any child read this. Sure, it;s a tad out there, but there is definitely mind control in this from the substances he consumed in the forest lowering his inhibitions.
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:11 PM
It would be awesome if this continued
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:02 PM
PUT ME IN THE 'NOT IMPRESSED' GROUP, ALTHOUGH I'V ENJOYED PREVIOUS STORIES BY THIS AUTHOR, I FOUND THIS VERY 'UN-SEXY' & TOO 'FEY' FOR AN 'EROTIC' STORY........
Anonymous
10/29/16, 7:53 PM
Still waiting haha
Oct 25, 2016
Anonymous
10/29/16, 6:51 PM
definitely should write more leather stories