Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/16, 6:26 PM
Great start! I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Anonymous
10/30/16, 4:35 PM
very nice! Topaz and Wrestlr are some of my favorite authors, so I can't wait to see what you've got. So far, sounds hot. Looking forward to the rest!!
Anonymous
10/30/16, 4:34 PM
cannot wait!
Anonymous
10/30/16, 3:41 PM
Can't wait for the next part!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
10/30/16, 1:42 PM
Different. But very fun.
10/30/16, 12:37 PM
Wonderful build-up and new tension! I love this story!
Kyle
10/30/16, 11:41 AM
Scudder, I adored "The Planet of Desire" series. Great to see another fan. As for this story, I agree that "unintelligible" is a gross exaggeration and entirely unfair. A few typos but we all make those. Baralai, great story. Really enjoy your work and, as others have already said, imaginative, creative and well done. And a great length too. Congratulations on another great piece.
10/30/16, 5:24 AM
The lovechild of Into the Woods and The Planet of Desire series by Tommyhawk (look for it on Nifty if you don't know it!) Brilliant idea!
Anonymous
10/30/16, 3:17 AM
I like the irony of the last bit of the story, where the Storyteller's like 'nah only world hoppers get turned into forest bimbos' when in actuality he could make literally anyone a forest slut with a story. I'd love to see a story that plays that up, where the recipient is completely naive of what's happening to him cause 'it could only ever happen to outsiders'
10/30/16, 1:36 AM
Oh and I think some of the strong criticism over the grammar is a bit much. I actually didn't notice that much, and I certainly wouldn't say any of it was "unintelligible". Pull more men from the real world into this realm please!