Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/16, 3:17 AM
I like the irony of the last bit of the story, where the Storyteller's like 'nah only world hoppers get turned into forest bimbos' when in actuality he could make literally anyone a forest slut with a story. I'd love to see a story that plays that up, where the recipient is completely naive of what's happening to him cause 'it could only ever happen to outsiders'
10/30/16, 1:36 AM
Oh and I think some of the strong criticism over the grammar is a bit much. I actually didn't notice that much, and I certainly wouldn't say any of it was "unintelligible". Pull more men from the real world into this realm please!
10/30/16, 1:33 AM
Wow. Very different and a great read. DEFINITELY not "children's lit" and thinking it is is quite ridiculous. I'd be very concerned if any child read this. Sure, it;s a tad out there, but there is definitely mind control in this from the substances he consumed in the forest lowering his inhibitions.
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:11 PM
It would be awesome if this continued
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:02 PM
PUT ME IN THE 'NOT IMPRESSED' GROUP, ALTHOUGH I'V ENJOYED PREVIOUS STORIES BY THIS AUTHOR, I FOUND THIS VERY 'UN-SEXY' & TOO 'FEY' FOR AN 'EROTIC' STORY........
Anonymous
10/29/16, 7:53 PM
Still waiting haha
Oct 25, 2016
Anonymous
10/29/16, 6:51 PM
definitely should write more leather stories
Oct 25, 2016
Firebird
10/29/16, 11:38 AM
Great Story btw: Angelo di Zolfofuoco, nice name for the devil, messenger of sulfur and fire/messenger of hell.
Spandexlad
10/29/16, 11:23 AM
I really enjoyed the story.
Tattcub
10/29/16, 10:42 AM
While I agree that really bad grammar and spelling can spoil a story, especially if in a book you have bought. We haven't bought anything here, just clicked a fave with our sweaty palms.I generally believe that most of these stories are meant to be read while scrolling down single handed (If you get my drift). I'm pretty sure that most of us appreciate the story, I certainly do and this author has been prolific over the years and knows what they're doing. Let's be honest here, most of us are here to blow our loads. So don't bother with the little stuff. Unless, of course you're bothered by your little stuff :-). Baralai thanks for your efforts.Always appreciated and really well written and imaginative.