Recent Comments

Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
10/29/16, 4:40 AM
Wow!! Damned hot! And to become a man's pet dog! Oh fuck!
Anonymous
10/29/16, 1:41 AM
WOW! This is equally funny, creative and hot! I agree with the man from the crowd, we want to hear more stories on this scenario! Since this is a fantasy world, you can add very whimsical features on the characters. I'd like a story with a cop turned into a muscled fairy boy, or a cowboy turned into a dumb unmanly knight-errant (riding a pink unicorn!).
Anonymous
10/29/16, 1:39 AM
I loved this story...it was very creative and if I may say so, edgy. A lot of people come to this site looking for revenge stories, or brutal sex, mind control slaves, etc. It's nice to read a happy, yet erotic story every once in a while.
LanceFan2001
10/28/16, 11:33 PM
I don't think "not into children's lit" and I read the same story. Balarai does it again with an awesome story! I prefer the house guest and the hotel series better but still a sexy fun read...
Anonymous
10/28/16, 11:18 PM
^ I agree, men being mind controlled into having sex with men is super out of place here.
Not into Children's lit....
10/28/16, 11:13 PM
Would make a good illustrated children's gay storybook or cartoon...However while I give the author credit for taking the time and effort to write it, I didn't find it the least bit 'sexy' or a 'turn-on' like most stories on this site & frankly felt it was totally OUT OF PLACE on Gay Spiral Mind Control...Sorry !!!
Anonymous
10/28/16, 6:52 PM
What a terrific story...great great job...thanks
Anonymous
10/28/16, 4:00 PM
This story was so imaginative and original. You may want to run a spell checker/grammar checker to give your document a go-through before you post. However ---- It goes without saying that this is the genesis of an entire series. Have fun drafting and editing the stories. You'll have fun.
Anonymous
10/28/16, 12:46 PM
Great als usual
Redbird
10/28/16, 11:13 AM
Wow. Very fun and imageitive . And no mention super sexy.