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8/27/24, 2:21 PM
I love the original and I love this addition. Excited to see where it goes!
May 1, 2024
8/27/24, 1:19 PM
Hopefully, someone will continue this, because this is very well written, and there is a lot that could be done to expand on the loose threads.
8/27/24, 12:30 AM
This story really speaks to the part of me that still judges me for this kink, it's interesting because it's been a long-time since a story in this site managed to both make me horny and sad lol There are many Chekhov's guns planted in this story that depending on how they play out, will massively affect the way this story ends; like I'm surprised Rob hasn't flat out ordered Alex to obey only him, which means... Someone else might, ergo Chekhov's gun. I'm curious to see how it plays out, and I'm fascinated by how audiences have responded to Rob with such a punishing gaze and desire for comeuppance seeing as he is way less cruel than a lot of main characters on this site!

8/27/24, 1:12 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) I don't think Rob thinks things through. He keeps submitting to his id before telling himself that this is going to be the last time (this no need to adjust the "authority clause"). But speaking of untouched commands, Rob didn't make Alex remember he can eat normally. I have a feeling someone is going to lose their job soon...
8/27/24, 12:07 PM
Eddie: You're kidnapping orphans! Marky: Don't be silly! You can't kidnap orphans; nobody wanted them in the first place.

8/27/24, 12:16 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) let's say Marky will have to face the fallacy of this attitude eventually in the stories I'm planning and leave it at that, out of Gil's sons, he may be the dutiful one, but he, like his brother Hans, has his limits, and the primal beast will push him beyond his limits like he did with Hans, Pcm helped me planing mostly the North storyline and Hans' story as well

Pcm
8/27/24, 12:37 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) This comment. This is perfect. I have no word.

Pcm
8/27/24, 12:38 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Excited to see where you take the story!

8/27/24, 12:50 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I will start the North story once i'm done wit the story i'm working on, Writer's block is a bitch
Test
8/27/24, 11:48 AM
C,ff
8/26/24, 9:04 PM
More more more please.

8/27/24, 11:47 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks, John! Finishing up my next Paladin story now, but I'm loving the interest in this series, so maybe I should return to this one next, eh? ;)
8/27/24, 7:24 AM
Absolutely brilliant. This is one of the BEST stories I’ve read anywhere in the past year. What wonderful talent and imagination! Bravo!

8/27/24, 11:46 AM
@[Margrave](/user/show/10044380) Hey, thanks - that's really great to hear. Love when a story does the trick! ;) I'm currently finishing up the next Paladin and the Witch book (in Sept, fingers crossed), but your comment reminds me I have another witch, a bad witch, I need to return to! Josiah is so different from my other MCs, so it's a fun headspace to get into.
8/27/24, 11:31 AM
Fucking love this story so much i made my own version. Please continue this story.
Anonymous
8/27/24, 10:18 AM
Now when you say that the next chapter is more darker you mean erotic sex or more deaths and tragedy

Pcm
8/27/24, 11:02 AM
@Anonymous Why not both?